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    dots Submission Name: The Women Who Loved Sunflowersdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Story/Nostalgia
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    dotsThe Women Who Loved Sunflowersdots
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    Where did she go?
    The woman who didnít care about
    Nail varnish, face powder, and eye lash curlers.
    The one who wore pants with strawberries on them.
    And shirts that were a little too big.
    She could wear anything and still walk around
    With such beauty and elegance.
    I wish she could see that when she looks in the mirror.
    Instead she sees grey strands and smudged eyeliner.
    What happened to the woman who loved sunflowers?
    Sheíd make them grow as
    Tall as she was. She was so proud of them.
    She was so proud of us. What happened to the women
    Who picked fresh blackberries with us during the summer time?
    They were warm as they baked in the afternoon sunlight.
    She loved it.
    What happened to the women who didnít care
    Of what others think of her? What happened to the women
    Who wasnít afraid to get her hands dirty? What happened to
    The women who was independent, and strong-hearted?
    I miss her.




    Submitted on 2012-08-05 08:47:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If only this one is written for me...this is really sweet. but part of growing and becoming a better person is change and that's something we cannot control. I'm insecure too as a woman I think somehow we ought to feel that way especially when we become older. Its n normal to feel that way and its okay to change too.
    thanks for the interesting read..:-)
    | Posted on 2012-08-23 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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