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    dots Submission Name: Seasonal Sensationdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSeasonal Sensationdots
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    Things start to change,
    As time goes on,
    Leaves start to color,
    Forests lose birds song,
    What was once young and fresh,
    Has now reached it's peak,
    It has matured with age,
    And is now brittle and weak.
    That one simple color,
    Turned into an array of shades,
    Nature becomes complicated,
    Until the next day,
    When the winter winds hit,
    Clean up everything in one sweep,
    Piles all past debris,
    In one hidden heap.
    The icy cloud may seem harsh,
    But it's a valuable sign,
    For fresh starts are nearby,
    Everything will be fine.




    Submitted on 2012-08-09 08:30:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is nice..i can feel a bit of sadness here..sadness that has something to do with change and fear of all being lost but at the end there's also hope..hope that nothing will be lost after all and that everything will return in time..good job
    | Posted on 2012-08-28 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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