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    dots Submission Name: Go with the Flowdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
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    I'm on a boat in a river,
    Sailing with the flow,
    I have no idea why I thought,
    I should give turning around a go.
    Rowing against the currents,
    Is elementary and lame.
    You end up tired and disappointed,
    Streaked with a bit of shame.
    We think way too much,
    Too confident in what we know,
    The only shot to a peaceful life,
    Is to just go with the flow.




    Submitted on 2012-08-09 23:02:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      'Rowing against the currents,

    You end up tired and disappointed'
    -- I like this line..I feel like this too..too tired to go my own since a lot goes against me

    'The only shot to a peaceful life,
    Is to just go with the flow'
    -- there is truth in this line but I also think that there is something worthwhile about going against the flow
    the feeling of accomplishment in something you do, something you sacrificed a lot for, something you sweated and bled for..there's nothing like those feelings
    go with the flow, be part of the flow, and go against it sometimes..see what you can do..
    think about it..

    nice poem btw
    | Posted on 2012-08-29 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes you have to go against the current to remind yourself who you are, or to stand up for what is right. You may be standing alone, and you may get worn down by the current, but it's worth it :)

    Thanks for the interesting read
    | Posted on 2012-08-13 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]


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