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    dots Submission Name: The Cold Truthdots

    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 392
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Cold Truthdots

    You want me to lie and tell you what you want,

    But thats not who I am,

    Never was from the start,

    Come to realize why should I spare your heart?

    When all anyone else did was tear mine apart..

    Don't come to me looking for sympathy...

    All you'll find is what you really need,

    Flat out and clear as day,

    I'll tell you how I see it,

    Maybe set you on sail going the right way,

    Doesn't matter if you heed my word,

    Because I'm so truthful I'll tell you who's my Lord,

    I'm occupant of this planet I know,

    Were all these plants and tree's somehow thrive and grow,

    It's being destroyed by our own hands,

    Look at yourself in the mirror,

    Then at that hairspray in your hand,

    Everyday is filled with mild irritants,

    As they build up,

    People lose their hearts,

    Because of all that bullshit and drama,

    They've finally had enough,

    It doesn't take much for people to become cold,

    This is the truth,

    Please heed my words..

    You can only ask for so much,

    Before enough is enough,

    Some stay kind,

    Most's hearts have become rough..

    This worlds too shady,

    To know who you can trust,

    Friends can be found in every city or town,

    But it's who you want in your life,

    Those are the only ones that should ever be around,

    You don't need the drama,

    The judgemental glares,

    As your belief,

    When you die you'll walk up those pearly stairs,

    Up to that gate for "God" as he awaits,

    But I live my way,

    So don't force your ways on me,

    For as you can take a horse to water but can't make it drink,

    You cannot force someone to believe,

    Opinions make this world easier to deal with,

    Without them we'd all be swallowed up in the storm of bullshit,

    People judge and people lie,

    I've learned this from people who did it all the time,

    Took so long for me to realize,

    Whats gonna stop you from doing evil after you die?

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