[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: The Cold Truthdots

    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 392
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 419
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2604


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Cold Truthdots

    You want me to lie and tell you what you want,

    But thats not who I am,

    Never was from the start,

    Come to realize why should I spare your heart?

    When all anyone else did was tear mine apart..

    Don't come to me looking for sympathy...

    All you'll find is what you really need,

    Flat out and clear as day,

    I'll tell you how I see it,

    Maybe set you on sail going the right way,

    Doesn't matter if you heed my word,

    Because I'm so truthful I'll tell you who's my Lord,

    I'm occupant of this planet I know,

    Were all these plants and tree's somehow thrive and grow,

    It's being destroyed by our own hands,

    Look at yourself in the mirror,

    Then at that hairspray in your hand,

    Everyday is filled with mild irritants,

    As they build up,

    People lose their hearts,

    Because of all that bullshit and drama,

    They've finally had enough,

    It doesn't take much for people to become cold,

    This is the truth,

    Please heed my words..

    You can only ask for so much,

    Before enough is enough,

    Some stay kind,

    Most's hearts have become rough..

    This worlds too shady,

    To know who you can trust,

    Friends can be found in every city or town,

    But it's who you want in your life,

    Those are the only ones that should ever be around,

    You don't need the drama,

    The judgemental glares,

    As your belief,

    When you die you'll walk up those pearly stairs,

    Up to that gate for "God" as he awaits,

    But I live my way,

    So don't force your ways on me,

    For as you can take a horse to water but can't make it drink,

    You cannot force someone to believe,

    Opinions make this world easier to deal with,

    Without them we'd all be swallowed up in the storm of bullshit,

    People judge and people lie,

    I've learned this from people who did it all the time,

    Took so long for me to realize,

    Whats gonna stop you from doing evil after you die?

    Submitted on 2012-08-10 07:46:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    untitled written by Outlaw
    The World written by jjd
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.