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    dots Submission Name: The Eve's Enddots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsThe Eve's Enddots
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    The moonlight beams on this eve's hour
    With eyes that colored the setting sun
    Shades and shades intensify, fade
    Slowly close, drifting away

    To leave a heart broken,
    with a solitary tear
    And a shadow saunters
    To take a soul

    Stay motionless, blend
    as the winds flow.
    Soon life will embrace you, my dear
    Life from another world.

    Oh sweet Luna cries in this eventide
    In sight of mystique sorrow.
    But such was never meant
    To last til a lifetime's end

    For at the summit of such undaunted night
    Dawn will slowly creep,
    For glory after strife;
    Left no pain after death.




    Submitted on 2012-08-11 11:01:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was then that darkness fell
    with a carillon of bell.
    The gloaming hour gathers power
    Magick is the sum of all fear
    death but a whisper of ear



    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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