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    dots Submission Name: My Solitudedots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMy Solitudedots
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    i have traveled far and wide,
    befriended more than few
    I have witnessed friendships die,
    and bonds so strong and true

    I have seen love manifest,
    in someone else's eye
    I have felt the quivers of
    the slightest touch, divine

    I have cried not once or twice,
    when hearts break and die
    I have felt the loss of love,
    and loss of will to try

    All these things I've done and more
    as boredom, to me, comes by
    No wealth have I nor treasures too.
    Enclosed in four walls, I stand by

    Finding freedom in pieces of paper,
    with hard or soft covers fine
    Creating my own realities with,
    this solitude of mine.




    Submitted on 2012-08-11 22:29:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This one is really great and I read it three times and it just have a nice flow and meaning. This is well-written,the best of what I read in your works so far.
    Good job!
    Jen
    | Posted on 2012-08-28 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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