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I feel


Author: hollowshell
Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 39 /40 /14
Words: 209
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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All my drunken mind can manage. Yeah.


I feel



I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't feel anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't think anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the only thing I have anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the reason I pretend some more.

It's the way my dad is always there.
It's the way he never seems to care.
It's the way I keep it all inside.
It's the only way I have to hide.

I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't love anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't speak anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the only thing I have to feel.
I feel dead,
and that's the reason I pretend to heal.

It's the way it is always my fault.
It's the way that I was always taught.
It's the way I have to take care of everyone.
It's the way that I am left, as the only one.

I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't take anymore.
I feel dead,
and that's the reason I can't live for.
I feel dead,
and that's the only thing that's going my way.
I feel dead,
and that's the last thing I will ever say.




Submitted on 2012-08-15 15:43:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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