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    dots Submission Name: I feeldots
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    Author: hollowshell
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 39/40/14
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       All my drunken mind can manage. Yeah.


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    dotsI feeldots
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    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't feel anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't think anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the only thing I have anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I pretend some more.

    It's the way my dad is always there.
    It's the way he never seems to care.
    It's the way I keep it all inside.
    It's the only way I have to hide.

    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't love anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't speak anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the only thing I have to feel.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I pretend to heal.

    It's the way it is always my fault.
    It's the way that I was always taught.
    It's the way I have to take care of everyone.
    It's the way that I am left, as the only one.

    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't take anymore.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the reason I can't live for.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the only thing that's going my way.
    I feel dead,
    and that's the last thing I will ever say.




    Submitted on 2012-08-15 15:43:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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