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    dots Submission Name: I Like Firedots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       im flaming which made me think about fire which made me come up with this


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    dotsI Like Firedots
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    I like fire.
    The way it can burn down a village,
    With a single spark.
    The way it licks it's victums,
    Devouring ever so quickly
    Till all that's left is ash and dust.
    I like the way it has no mercy.
    It gives no second chance.
    It blazes beautifully, in vibrant orange,
    Unleashing angry red and shocking blue.
    I like the way it can't be tamed.
    You can't stuff it in a jar or
    Shove it in a box. It eats it all up,
    It creeping through your memories
    And prized possessions, not even with
    A second thought it makes a lunge for you
    It simmers the skin of the slow.
    I like the way it's respected.
    You don't fuck around with it
    Or you'll get burned.




    Submitted on 2012-08-16 00:03:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Fire is kewl! However much one writes about fire it never
    gets old. A cow destroys Chicago with a little help from
    fire. That is amazing and kewl. The Devil is punished with fire
    and fire cooks your hotdog. O yes fire makes me hot!
    I think I will go outside right now and build a fire at
    the neighbors house.
    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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