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    dots Submission Name: Vortex - The Imagination That Is!dots

    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 499
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsVortex - The Imagination That Is!dots

    Youíre gonnaí have to try really hard to change my mind.
    I donít ever want to worry about any kind of figurative crime,

    unless its mine,

    I donít even want to abstain my mind

    That means

    Any limitations that stop me blind,
    any kind of configuration that doesnít tell me why

    has no place in my mind,

    let the solar light find its own kind
    ill always turn away from anything that doesnít help me shine
    let its vibrations transcend the speed of light
    turning the worlds time,
    and mine

    let me grasp this worlds indignation full of captive turnings in its remunerations by falling for the nostalgic tribulations

    hold my hand,
    donít breeze by,
    let the moment fall on your shoulders,
    and let it take you somewhere,

    somewhere far and not real,
    Somewhere that you could only imagine

    Just try and make it your own figurative crime

    Let your desires make your own time
    Let the versatile world shine its million year old light

    itís a star,

    Let it be me that breaks you free
    Let me hold your hand

    and take you through the vortex of the imagination that is.

    The sun shines as it is the speed of light that craves everything you might.

    Itís vibrations work to seek and transcend anything in its molarity,
    in its infusion so to speak.

    So every time you just make do,
    youíre only standing back ,
    far from what you can really do,
    take my hand

    so that I can bring you through the vortex of the imagination that is.

    take my hand,
    hold my hand

    Glimpse this world,
    as you really see it

    Donít let it be configured by someone that doesnít tell you why,

    as it has no place in your mind
    thereís no need to abstain
    let the solar light find you
    it will help you shine,

    Bask in its speed of light,
    while watching and feeling the might of your world

    I can let you go,
    so you can do the same,
    use that vortex and breath easy,

    Donít worry about any kind of figurative crime

    Unless its yours,

    That means,

    Its your turn,
    find someone,
    return the favor,

    Take them to be a star of their own unlimited world full of no indignation that holds its own captivation while not remunerating by falling in its own nostalgic tribulations!

    Let the moment fall on their shoulders,
    and let it take them somewhere far,
    somewhere only they could imagine.

    Let them take your hand,
    hold your hand,
    and keep holding your hand

    Until they can let go

    and find,

    The imagination that is.

    Submitted on 2012-08-16 16:33:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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