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    dots Submission Name: It's hard to seedots
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    Author: longwinterdays
    ASL Info:    21/F/WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 204/190/64
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    It's hard to see through the tears. Disappointments of years long passed. Being strong isn't something I'm good at. So the walls, they crumble. Years of glass built around me, shatter. Shards I'm afraid to touch... Scared they'll only cut my deeper. The questions in my soul slice me open. Make me wonder. But I can never ask. Not now, not ever. Let it be, they say. It'll work itself out. I'm trying. Have been trying. Trying to be strong and move on. Create a new start. You always come back. Come back for me. I will the tears and the fears and the searing pain to just cease. Cease to exist. They're still here, more real. More real than ever. I stare at the wall and pray, pray that you have strength. The strength I can't show. I never should have had you on that pedestal 'cause you just kept failing. Falling. Like these tears. Endless




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      This is why doctors give out drugs so u do not have to feel this way. Me I am poor so I make do but if you can go see a pro.

    Well I hope you make it. May life prove to be all rose colored glasses
    from here on.

    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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