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    dots Submission Name: roguesdots
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    Author: caster
    ASL Info:    31.M.MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 136/280/161
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 629
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    dotsroguesdots
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    like a lighthouse, alone, i was once set aflame
    now i struggle to recall just the shape of your face

    i ran aground,
    i ran aground

    and i gave myself up and let you rite down
    what good is a ship when the captain is drunk at the helm

    i ran aground,
    i ran aground

    every word is a stone to rock me to sleep
    cliché as they come i swear that they never come cheap

    i ran aground,
    i ran aground

    fashioned a map when i got lost in the sound
    but it led me so far from my home

    i ran aground,
    i ran aground

    and i’m calling you out, alone, like a lighthouse burned to the ground
    oh my god, where were you when

    i ran aground,
    i ran aground,
    i ran aground,
    i ran aground/




    Submitted on 2012-08-17 14:32:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey there...

    nice to see you around these parts again, stranger.

    'where were you when'...

    sometimes i think life is full of let downs. mostly, it's the feeling that i am the let down and the guilt i carry with that. whether it's with God or the people that weave in and out of my daily breathing.

    i suppose that there is an ocean of possibility to better learn how to navigate. to be able to read the stars and listen to where they may guide you. every now and again there is impact. how it might jar you awake. maybe it's about rebuilding and setting out again. you know, fix the leaks in the hull and what not, thinking: where was i when...

    idk.

    just some thoughts.

    and to say i've always appreciated your lyrical senses.
    | Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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