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    dots Submission Name: Mommy R.I.P </3dots
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    Author: loveofpoetry
    ASL Info:    20/female/New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 21/40/70
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 648
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    dotsMommy R.I.P </3dots
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    I keep feeling the pain of you being gone
    I want so bad for this to not be real
    I'd do anything for one last conversation
    Give anything for one more "I Love You"
    I didn't get to tell you how much you meant
    I wish I could have one last hug
    You were my mother, and best friend
    My eyes are sore from all the tears
    I don't want to think about you being gone
    Hard to believe all of this is true
    Seems like it's all just a horrid nightmare
    You haven't been gone that long
    But it feels like it's been a lifetime
    I don't want to say good bye
    The tears keep streaming down my face
    Watching everyone gather around to remember you
    Makes the pain grow stronger more and more
    I'm not sure how I'll get through this
    My heart aches more with you gone
    I want so bad to see your smile once more
    I need so bad to hear your awkward laugh
    To have you back would be everything
    God missed his beautiful and sweet angel
    So he pulled her home to the heavens
    We all will hurt missing this special woman
    But there is a reason for everything
    Death is the hardest thing to get over
    God took my mother from me so early
    My world has turned completely upside down
    I love you more then anything mom
    And I will always miss you
    I close my eyes hoping to see you
    But when they open your never there
    The tears stream down even more
    I will see you again someday
    May your wonderful soul Rest In Peace
    In loving memory of Lisa Ellen Rue




    Submitted on 2012-08-18 14:46:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      she's smiling, but that's only because she's glad you miss her so, and she's sad because you're crying, not smiling.

    let her see your brilliance once again..
    | Posted on 2012-08-21 00:00:00 | by KeeperOfLight | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm so sorry for your loss no child shouldn't
    cry so hard for there mother
    but I cryied went my mother died too
    I feel for you my dear
    | Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      i think she would really appreciate this, i really do.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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