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Mommy R.I.P </3

Author: loveofpoetry
ASL Info:    20/female/New York
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Words: 284
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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Mommy R.I.P </3

I keep feeling the pain of you being gone
I want so bad for this to not be real
I'd do anything for one last conversation
Give anything for one more "I Love You"
I didn't get to tell you how much you meant
I wish I could have one last hug
You were my mother, and best friend
My eyes are sore from all the tears
I don't want to think about you being gone
Hard to believe all of this is true
Seems like it's all just a horrid nightmare
You haven't been gone that long
But it feels like it's been a lifetime
I don't want to say good bye
The tears keep streaming down my face
Watching everyone gather around to remember you
Makes the pain grow stronger more and more
I'm not sure how I'll get through this
My heart aches more with you gone
I want so bad to see your smile once more
I need so bad to hear your awkward laugh
To have you back would be everything
God missed his beautiful and sweet angel
So he pulled her home to the heavens
We all will hurt missing this special woman
But there is a reason for everything
Death is the hardest thing to get over
God took my mother from me so early
My world has turned completely upside down
I love you more then anything mom
And I will always miss you
I close my eyes hoping to see you
But when they open your never there
The tears stream down even more
I will see you again someday
May your wonderful soul Rest In Peace
In loving memory of Lisa Ellen Rue

Submitted on 2012-08-18 14:46:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  she's smiling, but that's only because she's glad you miss her so, and she's sad because you're crying, not smiling.

let her see your brilliance once again..
| Posted on 2012-08-21 00:00:00 | by KeeperOfLight | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm so sorry for your loss no child shouldn't
cry so hard for there mother
but I cryied went my mother died too
I feel for you my dear
| Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  i think she would really appreciate this, i really do.

| Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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