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Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Exhausted trees are shedding leaves,
The grass is painted languid yellow,
My shadow stretches, slipping
In between the cracks
A moment.

Submitted on 2012-08-18 17:41:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow! I really like this too, I am also writing these type of minimalistic poems. It seems our works are similar in some aspects. I'm gonna read more of your stuff and comment on it. I hope you don't mind...
| Posted on 2012-09-16 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  it's autumn, and i am falling into the crack between summer and fall...

the shadow does stretch in more ways than one...aging, the seasons changing...

we cause a bigger shadow towards the end of our lives...

i really like the idea of "exhausted trees"

yes, they must get tired shedding and then growing new leaves and then shedding again.

i think we get tired by our wears us down...

but there is splendid color in fall...and hopefully our lives are colorful and the colors even brighter at the end...

| Posted on 2012-08-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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