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    dots Submission Name: The Powerdots
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    Author: BevRead
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 20/41/28
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Powerdots
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    There is power behind her internal clock
    urging her to open her eyes
    flowers and photographs do not compare to the brilliant pigments in the morning sky

    The sunrise
    gives gently and patiently
    stored albums
    seconds that transform her soul

    The beauty overwhelmes
    a smile follows
    and pours through her hands as she puts on her husbands socks
    His internal clock has not yet found a ringtone that he adores as much as the silence he soaks in rest

    So she can delight in those motor skills that just seem to take up his precious time
    Those moment in bed where his muscles and blood flow calculate and regenerate for another day of work and excercise and pumping

    There is power
    at the end of the day
    a few moments of prayer gathering thought

    Power
    in the spirit Guided Truth
    That performs this word
    Thank You




    Submitted on 2012-08-23 11:05:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So u are putting socks on him?
    I want to be spoiled too! Have u
    got a clone? I can say thank u.
    All kidding aside I really like this
    I got lost in the moment while reading
    it.
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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