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    dots Submission Name: Recognizedots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/452
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 716
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       The people that are supposed to be there arent


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    If only you knew how far I have gone,
    Every night I reflect, on images not there.
    I have changed my situation,
    And open to learn so much more,
    I have found claritiy in my post agnostic world,
    I have sought out the heavens to help.
    I pray so I can end my anger to people arond me,
    I still place so many in front of me.

    I work beyond my expectations at work,
    To go home to my nightmares alone.
    I try so hard crying long nights,
    And wait til the sleep settles in,
    So i can do it all again in the morning.
    I seek so much help from others,
    Very few answer,
    To those I am grateful,
    Yet the disastor is still there..
    I relive my anguish,
    Only to find who I am once again,
    Yet frail,
    Always caught in the mix,
    I am void, I am empty...
    And I am upset,
    Because inside there is no control...




    Submitted on 2012-08-25 03:23:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is raw, so it attracts me. These emotions are all too familiar. We the broken are the very essence of inspiration and somehow the beginning and ending.of beauty. That's all I have to say on that... xo xo pioneerheart
    | Posted on 2013-01-20 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]
      recognize or recognise (&#712;r&#603;k&#601;&#609;&#716;na&#618;z)

    vb
    1. to perceive (a person, creature, or thing) to be the same as or belong to the same class as something previously seen or known; know again
    2. to accept or be aware of (a fact, duty, problem, etc): to recognize necessity
    3. to give formal acknowledgment of the status or legality of (a government, an accredited representative, etc)
    4. chiefly ( US ), ( Canadian ) to grant (a person) the right to speak in a deliberative body, debate, etc
    5. to give a token of thanks for (a service rendered, etc)
    6. to make formal acknowledgment of (a claim, etc)
    7. to show approval or appreciation of (something good or pleasing)
    8. to acknowledge or greet (a person), as when meeting by chance
    9. chiefly ( US ) ( intr ) to enter into a recognizance

    [C15: from Latin recognoscere to know again, from re- + cognoscere to know, ascertain]
    | Posted on 2012-08-25 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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