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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 93/88/44
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    my mind is a drug my pen is a needle
    the phrases are twisted the theories are lethal
    a prescription dose of the ink that you need
    words are the blood upon which i feed

    like a rush of blood strait to your head
    high out of your mind off the shit that i said
    fiendinding for more of the shit that you read
    o.d. off my lines and you might end up dead

    disguised by the lies
    consealed in my eyes
    awake in the morning
    the next one goodbye
    thoughts of your freedom
    do not get me high

    the drug in my blood
    is the pen in my hand
    the theory of which
    you do not understand

    contents of a bloodstream
    is just a state of mind
    lost in the theorhetical
    dreamscapes of the blind




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