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    dots Submission Name: "part 2"dots

    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 93/88/44
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots"part 2"dots

    coming off quick and
    languidly linguistic
    you're trying to hard
    because you already missed it...

    the insane theater is closing for tonight
    as i profess my lust for the creatues of the night
    somewhere in the darkness we might see the light
    somewhere in our minds we might conjure a sight
    ladies and gentlemen,have a goodnight

    a reason is an excuse with motives and half truths
    dont forget to ask why on your way past humanity
    dont forget you must die and remember your gravity

    take a good look around,
    witness a memory nostalgic in sound.

    everything is history,we write our own stories,
    turn a page in our book into the next morning.

    Submitted on 2012-08-25 11:35:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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