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    dots Submission Name: Hiddendots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsHiddendots
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    instilled with simple formats of a limited mind
    enclosed in a cage where potential once stood;
    mastery, a talent yet unknown
    for such a fearful soul to be bestowed

    aware of the aeons that tower;
    in every inch where pain and love surpassed each other
    and slowly subsided,
    there exists yet never found;
    but glistened in the tear of a knowing eye




    Submitted on 2012-08-25 12:48:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The Sun burns the Earth turns
    life has a chance of being
    part of a probability matrix.
    Which may be proof we live
    in a real matrix similar to the movie.

    Alas my mind cannot wrap itself
    around this reality. Are we forever
    on a trip through time? Or is
    time governed by the great processor
    That exists as a black void at the center
    of everything and nothing at all.

    This state hidden certainly from
    me leaves me to ponder weak
    and weary long into many
    a stormy night.
    | Posted on 2012-09-08 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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