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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Words of pain,
    pronounced everyday;
    in a world full of hate,
    taking life for dismay

    is there no hope then?
    I ask, humble cliché's,
    to feel the warmth of men,
    in solid embrace?




    Submitted on 2012-08-27 04:17:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Words of pain, of love
    to renounce everyday
    in a world full of hate
    taking life for granted.

    Is there no hope then?
    I ask in humble cliché's
    feel the warmth of a man
    a man embraced, touchable.


    very good. poe
    | Posted on 2012-08-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      this is on short but powerful write. I also feel like this since wondering what's happening to the world ha!
    anyway, it was nice
    | Posted on 2012-08-29 00:00:00 | by unknownguest | [ Reply to This ]


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