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    dots Submission Name: Wise as the Whispering Willowsdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
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    dotsWise as the Whispering Willowsdots
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    It's cute, but also a little pathetic how that little seedling think's she's a mighty tree. The elders of the forest have centuries on her, but she thinks she's as wise as the whispering willows and able oaks. She thinks she knows what it's like to feel the wind whip through her leaves 100 feet above the ground. She thinks she knows what it's like to witness fellow trees being reduced to stumps. She thinks she knows what it's like to tower above the world and watch the ants squabble and ride around in shiny boxes. She thinks she knows how to support a nest on her fresh, weak limbs. Stupid seedling; wait a hundred years and then we'll let you talk.




    Submitted on 2012-08-27 23:40:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is nice..it shows how naive the young can be..sometimes we think we know enough and that we don't need the advise of those who are truly wise like our elders..good job
    | Posted on 2012-08-28 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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