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    dots Submission Name: One liner about the iCasedots

    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 8
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOne liner about the iCasedots

    An Apple a day keeps the Galaxy away.

    Submitted on 2012-08-29 13:06:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know a lot of thought went into this poem
    however I am not sure about galaxy away
    I think An Apple a day keeps the Galaxy at bay.
    Is more apropos to the meaning you are looking for.
    Or how about

    Give me an Apple today and I will rule the Galaxy tomorrow.

    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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