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    dots Submission Name: Entertain Medots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 40/64/74
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 725
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1271



    Description:
       By:Crysta Perak
    August 29th, 2012
    Been working on this for a while, it’s been my state of mind since Friday. I realized that happens lately, I tend to test of the ideas of my poems… It changes the flow of things I normally do.


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    dotsEntertain Medots
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    Where’s the ambition?
    Why are you waiting for me to kiss you?

    There’s so many things not to do,
    why is it this one you actually choose?

    See the night in the day,
    let the clouds evaporate away,

    Allow myself to give into your power…
    before the world turns its cauldrons grey

    if I worried about regretting all the time
    I wouldn’t be doing the things I do.

    This is the governing of freedoms play
    feed my ingrained need to ratify
    so that I can service an attempted denial
    if you don’t allow for that, how can it be any fun?
    Make me –
    allow myself to give into your power.

    Venture
    Reach into your abyss; listen to its echo
    Reach for its compulsion; ebb it into your world

    concede to its manifestations, and wisely set the course toward your own pleasure.

    let the clouds evaporate away, while reminiscing of the rainbows before the sun shines the story of the constellations that ignite the genesis which break away from the solemn continuity of every day.

    Kiss me if you dare

    Allow myself to give into your power






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    ||| Comments |||
      Somewherewhen everything is happening! However if someone out-there sees you do it? Well it is all over. Therefore if I kiss u it has to be a
    secret.
    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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