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    dots Submission Name: Pygmaliondots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    Description:
       Pygmalion's a king from greek mythology
    I just found the word randomly and made this
    it's not that good but comments are great help so please comment:)


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    dotsPygmaliondots
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    Careful strokes caress,
    carving formless to perfection;
    the elevation of beauty in the eyes,
    ideals to love of a flawless creation

    tears come unceasing,
    assays of wishful thinking:
    an undeniable truth,
    sends a tender heart aching

    with screams and yells of silence,
    humbles the king;
    only heard by gods and goddesses,
    incarnates a dream




    Submitted on 2012-08-30 23:34:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Do we not just find this interesting?
    Falling in love with our own creation.
    This sounds perfectly sensible to me.
    I love you exactly the way I made you
    because I made you just for me.
    The only draw back comes
    when it is time to get a Goddess
    on our side. Unfortunately when it
    comes to the already living
    it is so hard to mold them into
    that just perfect partner!
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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