:( i can feel this so badly my friend.
i really enjoyed this because its almost sitting u would write on a card... or note and pass it to someone.... its original. has a texture tooo it. when i read it it doesn't feel extra mushy.."just "look. thiss is how you made me feel. this is how u make me feel. "....its pure. simple and its a mark i think alot of writers miss
I agree with the previous comment. I like your play on words. I also like how your poem resonates with thoughts of lovers past. It reminds me of the idea that you tend to be in love with the idea of a person as they were and not who they are now. The idea of a person is much harder to erase. Its deep rooted in our mind and hearts. Your poem is very lovely and very universal. I really enjoyed it.