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    dots Submission Name: Limitless vistas are before Youdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsLimitless vistas are before Youdots
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    loose the bonds of sanity
    slip into black waters
    grope blindly in the deep
    and visit the eternal keep
    let the wait of paranoia
    smother you to sleep
    then dream of the others
    they will tell you a tale
    of all the twisted fates
    of melancholy madman
    and chimera guarding gates
    loose the bonds of sanity
    Just quietly slip away




    Submitted on 2012-09-01 16:03:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Loose the bonds of sanity" In the beginning there was endless void, inky blackness, and infinite possibility, but, to quote myself, "before there was anything that mattered....everything that would ever be existed....it was the essence of totality. Now this may sound like the Jewish concept of God's prowess (omniscient, omnipotent, omnipresent) but why must there be a self conscious entity god in order for this concept to remain true. If anything was possible everything that would ever be existed. So "grope blindly in the deep and visit the eternal keep" . The obvious states of hysterical delirium these contemplations cause the mortal entity could make one hold their breath as they fell asleep. So "then dream of the others they will tell you a tale of all the twisted fates of melancholy madman and chimera guarding gates", this realm of imagination we possess, the ability to conceive of infinite possibilities, lends even melancholy madmen chimera to guard their gates. So "loose the bonds of sanity Just quietly slip away". So, to hell with rational relativity, get into a relative rationality. Positively inspirational Dale, in a twisted sort of way!! If this doesn't seem rational you'll have to forgive me, I'm a little insane!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-09-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Im not connecting the title and description with the poem.
    Longing for insanity to quietly carry off someone?

    and I can see insanity having limitless vistas, yet you describe only the insanity of deep darkness.
    There's lots of insanity out there. Truly limitless vistas of aberration; from the subtle to the acute. From the sociopath to the nymphomaniac. Depression is just the tip of the proverbial iceberg.



    I do like the wait (weight) of paranoia. Quite apt.
    | Posted on 2012-09-02 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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