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    dots Submission Name: hellogoodbyedots
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    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshellogoodbyedots
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    Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody. ~J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye, Chapter 26

    i will scrape off a bit
    of the things that you said
    and remember you by
    the shape of your head




    Submitted on 2012-09-01 22:50:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      something that comes to mind here is:

    gee i really liked you, thought you were the cat's meow until you spoke.

    then it was complete disappointment.

    let me remember how you looked before you spoke.

    thought i wanted to get to know you...but immediately realized...ON second thought...No Thanks.

    lot said in four lines...

    less is more.

    like it

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-02 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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