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    dots Submission Name: Masochistic Affairdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsMasochistic Affairdots
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    Diamond tears rapture her ivory skin,
    Stains of deep red fell on her gown

    In a jar she kept each drop,
    Each falling hope she sought;
    Treasures for her soul, underground

    From serpentine eyes,
    And illusory lips;
    Uttering, breaking

    Still

    Seeking




    Submitted on 2012-09-02 10:53:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a moving poem. I could visualize the blood, pain, self mutilation...or was it just illusionary? It made me feel the machochistic flavor of your words .

    Wow.
    | Posted on 2012-09-29 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]
      On Neptune diamond tears fall
    like rain. And burn forever in testament
    to loves hot sorrows.


    Eyes of serpentine are ever more wily than jade.
    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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