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    dots Submission Name: "alpha emotion"dots
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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 93/88/44
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots"alpha emotion"dots
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    im gone again
    relax and let go
    through depths of this soul
    only i shall know

    i pick up the pieces
    as i hold on and let go
    through the depths of this heart
    that only i shall know

    time comes and it goes
    as im lost in depth
    and out of control

    hazardous thoughts
    bits and pieces break away
    i decide inside
    i will find myself some other day




    Submitted on 2012-09-05 19:31:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yes one must lose oneself to be found. This letting go is the key.
    remember the concept of (simultaneous decidability) if a choice
    is observed a choice is made. Speaking of hazardous I have been
    informed that the Geneva Convention prevents any enemy foreign
    nationals from being kept if my commode room. This is seems is because of noxious vapors. However it is ok to let friends avail themselves of this
    facility. Go figure huh!

    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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