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    dots Submission Name: I Will Wait For My Lovedots
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    Author: Raven039sTouch
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I wrote this, because even though I feel lonely at times, I know deep within myself, I have enough respect and patients to wait for the one my heart was destined to connect with. Do not EVER take love for granted.


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    I see people fall in and out of love. Even though my heart yearns to belong to someone, to love you until your last breath; I laugh and know someday I'll find you my dear one. . .

    Mere Jadugara
    (My Charmer)




    Submitted on 2012-09-06 16:58:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is such sage advice I only wish I had read this like 30 years
    ago. Alas a pretty face I was smitten and the rest is nightmare.
    I do hope you wait until your dear one arrives it will so be worth it! In the mean time just find a buddy to use then you wont be so
    tempted.
    | Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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