Dissociation by Rainwater

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Submission Name: Dissociation dots

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Author:	Rainwater
Elite Ratio:	2.25 - 7/29/19
Words:	18

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
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Description:
Feeling dissociated is an odd sensation that's not easily described.

Dissociation dots

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I am choking
I am floating
And watching a movie of someone else's life
Through someone else's eyes

Submitted on 2012-09-06 22:11:08 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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sounds like sheryl crow..."i'm a stranger in my own life"---

sometimes it is how we feel...outside looking in at ourselves.

we don't belong...anywhere, not even in our own thoughts.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-09-07 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.