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    dots Submission Name: Stay of Aspdots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsStay of Aspdots

    Those gorgeous horizons where
    the sun leaps like a salmon into
    a burning sea.
    Recall you to me.

    Now in these final days of my dying rut
    You have inspired a new vigor to blood
    the bull

    I have willed myself to look away from
    your soaring form yet
    My eyes will not obey

    A darling of danger you are a Bugatti
    In my Barona.

    Yet even drunken with love unto the asp
    You mange to taunt just beyond my grasp

    O my treacherous amour your bosom
    Blooms on brambles yet this only fans

    From couture shop and public fountain to
    urbane subdued lawns I seek thee

    Ney even into black forest grim's
    rack and rumble of ravine
    you are pursued

    I rally to havoc's cry
    For the hunt is joined
    And this tale called our love
    Shall surely be immortalized

    If not in arsenic and tears
    Then through longevity of years

    Submitted on 2012-09-08 04:27:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice to know you still believe in love. I take it back, apparently we don't have to wind up skewering ourselves just because our unbridled passions resemble chaotic vehemence. I can get to that. Well put. My favorite line has got to be "Yet even drunken with love unto the asp....You mange to taunt just beyond my grasp".

    | Posted on 2012-10-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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