Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: unwrittendots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 504
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



    Description:
       I stopped writing for five years and missed this site so much. I will be away here once again so this poem is perfect for this moment.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsunwrittendots
    -------------------------------------------


    this was the last epistle
    none dared to decode
    a maze of the space between,

    heart
    and
    mind

    truth
    and
    lie

    the limits of universe
    bound in margins of a paper
    none dared to write

    the decency of the word,

    goodbye





    Submitted on 2012-09-15 09:15:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      There are some things that we know
    Because the universe has whispered
    Them into our other ear.
    We never speak of these revelations
    Not even when making decisions based
    On their innuendos. I think this is because
    It is too painful to lay out the truth and
    Face the reality that it really was just
    a dream that no one shared.
    | Posted on 2012-12-28 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is quite a magical poem, something harrowing (for the reader) in the spaces

    and something of a plea from the narrator in the spaces

    so that when you read it,
    you are,
    we are,

    like an animal caught in a trap. the poem seems to weave like a bit of paper in the wind (magical heart)

    and it seems to demand that you do care.

    and so when you bring it -to the end in the way that you do - it is both regal and intensely humane, an end, at last.

    So, if it is an end, i love the understated way you achieve that, graceful bit of poetry.
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      and with that, she shuts the door and we hear her pen shuffling down the hallway...wondering if it or she...will ever return.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    195991

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Relativity written by poetotoe
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    prison written by ShyOne
    Records I written by Raphael
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry