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    dots Submission Name: unwrittendots

    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I stopped writing for five years and missed this site so much. I will be away here once again so this poem is perfect for this moment.

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    this was the last epistle
    none dared to decode
    a maze of the space between,



    the limits of universe
    bound in margins of a paper
    none dared to write

    the decency of the word,


    Submitted on 2012-09-15 09:15:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There are some things that we know
    Because the universe has whispered
    Them into our other ear.
    We never speak of these revelations
    Not even when making decisions based
    On their innuendos. I think this is because
    It is too painful to lay out the truth and
    Face the reality that it really was just
    a dream that no one shared.
    | Posted on 2012-12-28 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is quite a magical poem, something harrowing (for the reader) in the spaces

    and something of a plea from the narrator in the spaces

    so that when you read it,
    you are,
    we are,

    like an animal caught in a trap. the poem seems to weave like a bit of paper in the wind (magical heart)

    and it seems to demand that you do care.

    and so when you bring it -to the end in the way that you do - it is both regal and intensely humane, an end, at last.

    So, if it is an end, i love the understated way you achieve that, graceful bit of poetry.
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      and with that, she shuts the door and we hear her pen shuffling down the hallway...wondering if it or she...will ever return.

    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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