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    dots Submission Name: Say Nothingdots

    Author: PhoenixArjuna
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 431
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This is meant to be spoken and You can critique the video of that at http://youtu.be/Xpuw3FhjheI. The reason for this post is compare the original footage to the new one im about to record tonight. All input is appreciated and respected. Is there a way to post the video here?

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    dotsSay Nothingdots

    Every time I see your face
    I wish I saw it a little longer
    and whenever you leave without a
    Trace my imagination a little stronger.
    This is a feeble attempt
    To explain what god sent
    The passionate ones,
    take so long to get the hint
    What lust, longing, love, and lies
    we analyze and deal with
    To only understand
    we’ll probably die before we can
    Understand misunderstood
    We’re denied, and never could
    So say nothing to me
    is exempt from explaining itself to me
    I know you’ll see.
    What I wanted to say
    When there’s nobody else
    I’ve got a full flush of hearts to play
    All I’ve got
    is what I’m dealt
    Only to plead
    Seems my hands can only bleed
    this cavity my soul
    so believe
    I want nothing never more
    than whatever is all you need
    So when you lift your head before
    The signs you sigh accept and adore
    inconspicuous gutters that rival every floor
    The only vector remaining
    Alone….. We find so-called selves obsessed
    with reflections masquerading as the opposite sex
    Revolutions arrested,
    Another theory savage and untested
    Survivors from this dying star
    Purged from the palace perdition
    Unconscious and blinded in bliss
    eastbound for reconciliation
    together feared and fearless,
    breathe in this valley of the shadow of death
    harmonize this scene…relentless
    you lead….I fight
    I lead from dawn to dusk to twilight
    and mend this wound
    inflicted from a battle and meant for you…
    My freedom is a reoccurring choice to read and bleed
    And read the signs again synchronicity
    Speaks and slurs the universe
    with despicable distractions designed to detour
    Downtown toward dyslexic
    Angels can only lie…
    the spineless speech
    The poisoned plead
    peers of the meek and the underdog
    Inherit the nightmare
    revel and reincarnate the damaged seed
    Plays that never see the curtain
    pretend be another person so long
    living is amnesia lost in the illusion
    learned to speak dead last
    sleeping when we’re supposed to sing
    but every morning we meet each other,
    we wake up …and remember everything,
    I won’t be there unless it’s life or death or love on the line
    Answers eclipsed by the sun posing as this stanza
    still so unconscious and blinded I just can’t seem believe
    In maybe
    Somehow …..I just know you’ll just know when it counts and smile
    surely see…and say nothing to me.

    "If one is to be doomed, one must be beautiful, or the drama is only a comedy. And therefore, Unbeautiful..."
    -Joanne Greenberg "I Never Promised You a Rose Garden"

    Submitted on 2012-09-17 03:29:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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