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Ive got to move on

Author: maggotgirl
ASL Info:    26/ohio
Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 8 /4 /12
Words: 173
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Ive got to move on

Why so painful?
Why so difficult?
I can see the darkness in you
It overpowers the little goodness in you

Tear by tear
heartache by heartache
Ive got to grow up
Ive got to move on

Move on without you
My life would be so sweet
I wouldnt know what to do if it was so easy
easy to live
easy to breathe

Your life overwhelmed me
to the point of self destruction
To endure this culture
I had to hide my soul
Grown to hate myself
Where did I go?

Next time ill know
to steer clear of you
jump into air
this all cannot be true

Into the wilderness
Ill climb all the trees
Im just begging you now
please let me be

Ill still think of you everyday
I will wake up and actually enjoy my day
And to have survived the nightmare
More aware I am than ever
How beautiful life is
Relieved and so blessed its all over...

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