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    dots Submission Name: one love for two heartsdots
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    Author: littlepoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 737/570/274
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       this my heart layed out in on plate now give your thoughts


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    One love

    The first time love came to me
    I was so afraid it reminded me
    Of two hearts trembling so afraid

    I thought what a wonderful
    World some one could make
    Feel this way how great

    You could make me feel so loved
    So at night I close eyes
    And say a little prayer

    Dear lord donít ever let this stop
    Because my heart would break
    And my tears could never stop

    And my fears would take over
    If you should need to cry
    You can come to me

    You are the difference between
    Sunshine and rain
    And when dark clouds come

    Iíll be there to comfort you
    If being beautiful
    Hurts

    Come be with me give
    me your thoughts
    Thereís a beautiful spot

    A place where your heart can rest
    Even when your cold
    In this love of mine.




    Submitted on 2012-09-20 21:56:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      My only suggestion,
    "Come, be with me
    give me your thoughts
    there's a beutiful spot"

    I like the honesty of this piece, and not holding back just pouring out. It has this sensibility it gives to the reader.

    Thanks for sharing,

    Jen
    | Posted on 2012-09-25 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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