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    dots Submission Name: An Off Daydots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Ever had one of those days...


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    dotsAn Off Daydots
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    Gave the cat orange juice,
    Watered the plants with wine.
    Why is my shirt on backwards?
    My watch is telling me the wrong time.
    I put the icecream in the oven,
    The steak, in the fridge.
    I sauntered in the grass,
    And right under a bridge.
    I put the wrong key in the ignition,
    And shoved the wrong one through the door.
    I vacummed the shelves,
    And quietly dusted the floor.
    Some people might find that
    These days are horrid pests.
    I, however, think a litte deviaton
    Could really interest.




    Submitted on 2012-09-20 22:31:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this has a playful tone to it yet has truth in deeper meaning..I really enjoyed reading this
    | Posted on 2012-09-22 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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