I am a musician (guitar player) and a singer, though you might expect me to be prejudiced against tone deaf singers I am also a martial artist and I can primal scream appreciate sounds from the soul. I particularly appreciated your second verse. As strange as it might occur to you I can obstinate expressiveness really relate to that on the depthfully pervasive factor. I had a little bit of trouble with the fourth verse : "burning the living", until I thought, we are all like candles that enjoy to be lit. So we raise the dead : boy there are a lot of metaphysical discrepancies to be found there, not all of us where good. Nonetheless that doesn't mean we can't understand what caused these discrepancies and offer them the possibility of redemption. Excuse me I wax philosophical, Sing on!!!