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    dots Submission Name: For the Love of Lustdots
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    Author: MmR
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    Words: 47
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    dotsFor the Love of Lustdots
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    Given another chance, 
    Like the fool I love to be
    I'd still caress my devil's cheek,
    As he gently suffocated me

    Control me from the inside out, 
    Take me from the outside in
    Run your fingers through my hair,
    And torture me all over again.




    Submitted on 2012-09-21 16:35:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love it MmR everytime I get on first thing I have to do is read anything new you've posted. This one did not let me down. I love the simplicity and I can relate. I have been in bad relationships that I knew were not good for me yet there is a feeling of wrong that can feel so right. Love the last two lines... the idea of knowing you will be hurt and it being a matter of time yet for now being caught up in the momment. Miss ya hope all is well!
    | Posted on 2012-10-02 00:00:00 | by Kersofmia | [ Reply to This ]
      This does tend towards music. Quite good.
    | Posted on 2012-09-22 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Circle formed with
    salt and fire
    blood burns in appeasement
    Incantations are chanted by
    rite of waxing moon.

    Given the power of
    the incubi He will love
    you until you die.


    | Posted on 2012-09-22 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      Splurgeness spry sporadic sprawl, spurious staunch succinct stymie tacit, tirade treatise vehement escapade tedium.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-09-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not sure how foolish it is...lust is all part of it...and part of love too...

    devil or angel...feels like it is from the outside in...but really starts from the inside out.


    bloody wonderful torture...

    the second stanza is a zinger.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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