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    dots Submission Name: Hypnotic Spelldots

    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHypnotic Spelldots

    You've pulled me under a
    Hypnotic spell
    That compells my heart
    To swell with love
    To dwell at the
    Sweet moments.
    I constantly hear
    Silver bells, laughing
    Lovely noises that drift
    In the breeze.
    Floating with ease.
    Along side your earthy
    Scent, which follows
    Me home and reminds
    Me of the places we went,
    Of the rules we bent,
    Of the time well spent.

    Submitted on 2012-09-23 01:26:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A sweet flashback and this works well. I like,"scent, which follows".
    I enjoy reading. Thanks for sharing
    | Posted on 2012-10-02 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet. :) I always like it when I see honesty and simplicity in writing.
    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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