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    dots Submission Name: until the dawndots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsuntil the dawndots
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    Some night as you sail across the
    vast sea of dreams. I will become
    the megalodon shadowing your
    ships prow.
    My great teeth and awesome tail
    will be yours to command.
    I will bring for you the finest
    tuna and even fetch dead-men's
    treasure from the briny deeps.

    None will dare molest you on
    your quest neither beggar nor
    pirate king will gainsay you pass.
    Your command shall be my desire
    and every appetite I have will need
    your pleasure for me to fulfill.

    Therefore remember I am yours
    until the dawn.




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      What I like most about this one is that certain doom is implied at the end of the (night)shift. You do these so well. Enjoy yourself while you can 'cause you know it's gonna end....
    | Posted on 2012-10-21 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]
      "apatite" is a mineral.

    "Your command shall be my desire
    and every apatite I have will need
    your pleasure for me to fulfill." This line is a somewhat difficult read for me.

    Nice dream here. The ultimate predator as a personal genie.

    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      This reminds me of "missives of the deep". I have to say your love is fiercely devotional. Her megalodon until the dawn, kinky indeed! I can see you driving your massive truck down the highway, having these visions as you pass the sleeping houses. Well done....again.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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