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    dots Submission Name: Tomato Tomatoe, CMP, 09-11-12dots

    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsTomato Tomatoe, CMP, 09-11-12dots

    Live today not tomorrow,
    Everyone is trying so hard to win,
    Yet no one notices we're all doomed,
    We're born in a world full of sin,
    Covered in slime,
    But everything is seen as clean,
    From the skies everything is fine,
    Yet in reality,
    Everything is far from divine,
    The worlds gone rotten,
    Down to the core,
    Oh the misery those babies have in store,
    Corruption is a sly whore,
    It pulls you in and you want more,
    Cruelty condemns,
    All that faulter,
    They say only the strong survive,
    Yet every minute people die,
    The weak-minded seem to rule,
    Maybe thats why they're so cruel,
    Everyday humans use others as tools,
    Animals and creatures that have thoughts and feelings too,
    The world has lost it's inner light,
    In people's minds there are only rainy days,
    There is no such thing as humane,
    Most people have lost their faith,
    It takes many to bring hope back again,
    People die,
    Families toss and turn,
    Still people never learn,
    For this,
    My conscience burns.

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