Human

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Human

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There comes a day When you learn of pain

Submitted on 2012-09-24 17:06:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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and when that day comes, you can never go back.

| Posted on 2012-09-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

There comes another day when you learn a little more. Quite thoughtful.

| Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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