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Human


Author: Rainwater
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Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Human



There comes a day
When you learn of pain




Submitted on 2012-09-24 17:06:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  and when that day comes,

you can never go back.
| Posted on 2012-09-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  There comes another day when you learn a little more.

Quite thoughtful.
| Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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