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Submission Name: Human dots

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Author:	Rainwater
Elite Ratio:	2.25 - 7/29/19
Words:	9

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
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Human

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There comes a day
When you learn of pain

Submitted on 2012-09-24 17:06:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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and when that day comes,

you can never go back.
| Posted on 2012-09-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
There comes another day when you learn a little more.

Quite thoughtful.
| Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.