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    dots Submission Name: Autumn Againdots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAutumn Againdots
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    Your husky auburn heart is going
    To reef me from my sombre dreams

    Your woollen coat has caught me down
    The bitter avenues of youthful nights

    Your amber introspection after
    Walking through the ballad of my past

    Your beefy stews and evening fires
    Bound my feet from further progression

    Your cooling charms are always fooling
    Us into your arms of decorated footpaths

    Your solar song is dimming long
    Into the bleakest cave of winter

    You leave me looming dry and fallow
    To dream by sleepy hearths

    So send me into you deep from further reason
    Let me write alone with the spirit of a season




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