Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Dear Frienddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 329
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Longing
    Total Views: 1018
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2019



    Description:
       I haven't touched it for years... Doesn't mean I don't ever think about it. Its a one day at a time battle. One I can only continually fight to win.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Dear Frienddots
    -------------------------------------------


    My Dear Friend-
    I hear you calling me at my weakest moments
    I feel you surrounding me at my lowest points
    Begging me to come toward you

    My Dear Friend-
    You are always with me
    During my darkest nights
    During my lonely days

    I hear you longing for me

    My Dear Friend, Heroin

    You are my enemy
    Yet you are my closest friend, My comrade, My partner in crime
    Keeping me high
    Making sure I am out of touch with my reality
    Our relationship is the hate & love kind
    You’ve stayed with me through it all
    Letting you go is the hardest thing I have ever done…

    Heroin, My Dear Friend

    I have no choice but to ignore your false façade
    Ignoring the urges I consistently have
    Moving past the bad days without following your cries out to me

    My nights have never been so long
    My sober minds relives all those times we shared
    My body aches for you
    My mind plays tricks on me
    My soul aches to be an innocent child once again

    Being wrapped up within your embrace
    No matter how much was reality and how much was my imagination
    It all meant so very much to me
    Never feeling alone
    Always high…
    Always away from the pain that never seems to leave my broken down body.

    In the end though
    You turned on me as everyone else in my life have.
    I became a viscous, uncompassionate person
    I ended up needing you more than you needed me
    I ended up ruining what little life I had to begin with

    Therefore,
    My Dear Friend, Heroin
    This is goodbye
    Goodbye to all the highs and lows we felt
    Goodbye to the painful withdrawal you happily gave me
    Goodbye to the regrets, bad choices, and broken relationships.
    Goodbye …. To what was

    Hello, to what is




    Submitted on 2012-09-24 19:45:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Loved this. This was fast flowing, straight from the heart.

    It felt though as if it was a first day sermon to it. Ideally, each new day should be taken as the first day in such cases until one fine day the feeling absolves.

    Cheers,
    AbsolutelyLost
    | Posted on 2012-10-18 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this one! It should definitely be your featured piece! I wish that I had written it... lol. I guess in a way, I helped, (or hindered... depending on your perception...) But here we are, above and beyond all of this, together, and free from this disease and blackness. Now there is only hope and light!!

    Love you.

    -Dave
    | Posted on 2012-09-30 00:00:00 | by Wired | [ Reply to This ]
      how ironic, the use of "dear friend"=---

    like the friend who tells you what you want to hear just to appease, rather than the friend who tells you what you need to hear to make you better.

    it is day by day--

    i remember a similar battle...and it was day by day...each day i woke up looking for a reason not to...and survived one day at a time.

    i'd been to the brink, and come back...and each day i took a step in that direction, it was a smaller and smaller step...until i was able to walk the other way.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    196061

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry