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    dots Submission Name: I AM GLAD YOU WELCOMED ME HEREdots

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    I am glad you welcomed me here..
    After journey to enrich my view.....
    If i had sat with wishes and dreams...
    And still get the feeling unfilled

    I am glad you welcome me here
    to adventure and roam not alone..
    With you i want to share and learn...
    And continue to grow with my pen...

    I am so glad you welcomed me here...
    I feel more alive
    with more of me
    saying this is home right here

    Submitted on 2012-09-24 20:57:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've had a great time here. Granted it's somewhat platonic (as anonymous internet can be) but I've made many friends and solved many problems for myself with my writings. Had many an extended discussion and even learned new perspectives. Have fun newbie!!!

    | Posted on 2012-09-24 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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