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Author:	irrelevantme
Elite Ratio:	2.91 - 83/89/62
Words:	49

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Serious
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Description:
Boredom strikes

During Passing Times dots

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I am now growing
With these thoughts in mind
I stay up, silently

Penning
-becoming a habitual action
A weird one
(So they say)

For between
Shopping days,
Party nights,
I drag my bed,
T. V., pen, paper,
And write

Nonsensical,
Irrational,
Nonexistent,

I write

Submitted on 2012-09-26 03:40:08 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I have definitely felt like this before
Sometimes I just find comfort, relief, and contentment being in the comforts of home watching movies with a pen and paper in hand

nice write
| Posted on 2012-09-28 00:00:00 | by unknownguest | [ Reply to This ]
"i stay up/ silently penning"

i like that.

we write in the crevasses of our lives...

there are those who write a poem or so, here and there..

and there are poets who fulfill the need of writing, who find the spaces in which to do what we were born to do.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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