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    dots Submission Name: During Passing Timesdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
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    dotsDuring Passing Timesdots
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    I am now growing
    With these thoughts in mind
    I stay up, silently

    Penning
    -becoming a habitual action
    A weird one
    (So they say)

    For between
    Shopping days,
    Party nights,
    I drag my bed,
    T. V., pen, paper,
    And write

    Nonsensical,
    Irrational,
    Nonexistent,

    I write




    Submitted on 2012-09-26 03:40:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have definitely felt like this before
    Sometimes I just find comfort, relief, and contentment being in the comforts of home watching movies with a pen and paper in hand

    nice write
    | Posted on 2012-09-28 00:00:00 | by unknownguest | [ Reply to This ]
      "i stay up/ silently penning"

    i like that.

    we write in the crevasses of our lives...

    there are those who write a poem or so, here and there..

    and there are poets who fulfill the need of writing, who find the spaces in which to do what we were born to do.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-09-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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