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    dots Submission Name: Secret Admirerdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 627
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       it's just a crush hahaha!!


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    dotsSecret Admirerdots
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    downloading pictures;
    writings,
    copy and paste;
    reading journals, and
    status updates

    hour upon hour
    in this small internet cafe
    staring at your picture
    secretly sketching,
    drawing,
    picturing, mentally

    when you pass by at the halls,
    subtly capturing
    the last of your views
    side and back

    stalking . . . . . . . no!

    Admiring

    that is much better,
    that I can say




    Submitted on 2012-09-28 03:53:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg we cant help it can we! a new crush certainly makes life a billion times more exciting ;) nice write
    | Posted on 2012-10-05 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]
      I get the impression that a lot of
    women have evolved a stalker gene.
    However I will go along with the
    I am a watcher not a stalker theory
    for the moment. After all Girl
    watching and people watching are
    time honored traditions. We should be able
    to extend this to boy watching.
    I suppose this does come with a caveat.
    A watcher does not focus on a single
    individual. Therefore for proprieties
    sake you must stalk multiple guys!!
    Then if you ever do decide to take
    action you will have improved your
    chances of success too.

    Now this new profile picture is rather
    ominous. She who lurks in shadow
    may be of nefarious intent.
    | Posted on 2012-09-29 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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