Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Medicationdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LexDeadxGirl
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 1/2/2
    Words: 321
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 821
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1919



    Description:
       Something I wrote awhile back. I would say it is about being in love with the wrong person but you can't help it.
    interpret it as you will
    I would love feedback.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMedicationdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I'm not insane, these meds are to blame.
    Sitting alone, I scream your name.
    Spiraling down, my feelings are growing, this high is fading.
    Secluded in this shattered mess, you've left me to here to rot.
    What once was right, is now so wrong.
    I took all you gave, the needles searing and tearing my veins, Your lies have come full circle, you built me up then left me to fall down.
    Crumbling fragments of my heart scattered on the ground, You and my meds [face to face] battling it out, always trying to save my life.
    Then realizing that you're all the same, both destroying me one over dose at a time. Come here, I need you, You make me sick every time I taste you.
    But I need you just to get by...
    I may have become an addict but it's all I have to release this built up pain.
    It's always smoldering just beneath the surface, and all the sadness creeps up on me.
    Clouding my mind, blinding my eyes, swallowing me whole.
    Then, I reach for you and somehow make it trough, I'm scarred and scared but you numb my guilt every time.
    Always addicted, I'm a puppet on a string, a shadow, you control everything.
    You're my medication, the only thing real, you save me from the others, from myself...I'll always need you.
    You keep me breathing, but steal my breath, a constant weight crushing my chest. I'm smothering, but somewhat alive, watching the time pass by.
    Just you, me, and my meds. Three empty spaces with nothing to prove and no way to make it through. Your lies will overshadow my truth, but I don't care you've abandoned me anyways.
    All I need is that one dose, it takes it all away.
    The memories of you, your smile, your laugh, even the constant tears.
    I'm not insane, trust me.
    These meds are always to blame.




    Submitted on 2012-09-29 10:05:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Thank the gods if people did not keep falling for the wrong person TV would be so boring!
    If I am getting this right you are saying that chemically induced psychosis does not count as real.
    Well I have heard that crazy is as crazy does.
    Do you do crazy?
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    196104

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Wavelength written by saartha
    ME written by jjd
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Commencement written by Ramneet
    untitled written by Chelebel
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    To written by SavedDragon
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Bond written by saartha
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Incubus written by monad
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    This written by Chelebel
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    On Loop written by Daniel Barlow
    Giving written by jjd

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry