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    dots Submission Name: mapmakerdots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmapmakerdots
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    We are all about beginnings,

    how we met,
    the precise point when,
    longing turn to love
    as fresh water turn to salt.

    We are mapping stars,
    mark the point when one becomes,
    another, a half-sung goodbye,
    the finishing point.

    As rivers turn to oceans,
    we are end-points,
    waiting when the tide,
    comes in.





    Submitted on 2012-10-01 09:25:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A mapmaker charts what is there and must
    render a true representation to honor his
    craft. The explorer goes first even
    before the mapmaker. If he has luck on
    his side then he will be the first to discover love.

    Of course not being a mapmaker He may get lost
    in uncharted waters and then he is never seen again





    | Posted on 2012-10-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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